Wednesday, September 28, 2011

Rules of Writing Part 1: How to Write Prolifically


So far in my brand spanking new blog I’ve made several posts about my new novel and one observation. None of that is too constructive so I figure it’s about time for something useful.

So to start is my new series on the Rules of Writing. Over the years I’ve built up some ideas and tips and experience which I want to add to what’s already out there. I know there are plenty of guides on becoming a better writer, but each guide has something different to offer or a different slant on a concept, so hopefully you’ll find a few useful things in my series you can implement in your own writing.

So, without further preamble, onto Simon Stone’s Rules of Writing: How to Write Prolifically.


All writers want to be able to finish what they start. No one wants to read a story without an ending, or a book about 20th century aviation that only goes as far as the 1950s, or a biography about Elvis that doesn’t even get to That’s All Right Mama. As a reader, if you pick up a book, you expect to be able to finish it... at least, if you want to.

So why do so many writers (myself included) have a dozen or more (sometimes a LOT more) unfinished bits of manuscript tucked away in their drawers and harddrives that have never been completed?

There’s the obvious reason: They’re unfinished because they’re not all that good, because halfway through you realised the story was just a part of the huge learning curve a writer starts but never actually finishes.

But the other reason could be (and is in my case), that a work remains unfinished because you took so long writing each page, each chapter, each section. You constantly went back to sections to edit them, then read them again and edited them again, then left the whole thing for a few months after you lost steam, came back and, reading it though to catch up, began editing and changing again along the way... and on and on and on until finally one of the times you ran out of steam you never actually re-visited it again. Sound familiar?

What I’ve just described is, in itself, part of the learning process for a writer too. In my own case it took me a good fifteen years of trying to write about six different novels before I finally worked it out. Admittedly I had long breaks and juggled several careers and university in it all too, but it took a long time for me to understand how to start - and then FINISH a novel.

Once I realised what I needed to change I managed to write, edit, polish and have ready for publication three separate novels (each over 130,000 words in length) in the space of three years. And those three years also included full-time work, studying for a degree in physics, family commitments and some pretty time-demanding hobbies of their own. I consider that quite prolific.

So how did I manage it? I’ll explain by telling you what I don’t do when I set time aside to write:

I don’t pace the room with a pen in my mouth, thinking up the most profound, eloquent and jaw-dropping opening line in history. Maybe I should, but there are too many distractions and I’d probably end up playing my piano or watching TV before I realised it.

I don’t spend ten minutes beforehand in a yoga pose meditating to clear my mind. (Having said that I’ve never tried, so maybe that one works...)

I don’t drink and write. A drunk writer behind a fast keyboard has killed many a muse.

I don’t write a paragraph or two and re-read it to death until it’s lost all meaning and I’ve lost all objectivity and sanity – some would say I never had any. Sanity, that is.

I don’t (read try not to) get distracted by surfing the internet or checking emails or making a coffee after just five minutes of work. That’s sometimes a tough one.

I’ll leave the rest of the don’ts there but you get the general idea. So, here’s my first rule.

Important Rules of Writing Number One:

Get Writing.


That’s it. Succinct, simple, to the point. Bleeding obvious probably. Except it took me years to work that out.

Don’t mess around wondering what to write and worrying that it should be something spectacular. Just get stuck in. And that’s the best advice I could give to any aspiring writer. Get on with writing. If you’re staring at a blank page and don’t know how to start, just start writing random thoughts to get the head and fingers going; more often than not it will trigger something off. If you’ve been working on your master novel and hit a brick wall, take some time to think, sure, but not too long. No story is perfect on the first draft, that’s where edits and re-writes come in. Try and get every sentence and every paragraph and every plot-point exactly right first time around and that first draft will never get finished.

Now I’m not saying don’t plan ahead, because you need to. Having a good idea where you’re going in your story is REALLY important, but that’s different, that’s a separate post all on its own. When it comes to writing your actual novel, just get on with it. As an additional rule, think about this:

Don’t look back at what you’ve written unless you need to check something plot-wise.


This is a life-saver for me, so it's worth at least considering. I don’t look back when I write until the first draft is done. If I need to check something (the spelling of a character’s name or location or sub-plot) that’s fine, but I ignore the actual prose. If I see a typo I ignore it. If I see some really badly written dialogue I ignore it. The editing comes later. I force myself to leave it alone. It's hard, but it helps me finish the first draft.

Okay, so there you go, that's got me started. Hope that helps someone. Feel free to leave comments and tell me what I’ve missed.

The Shadowed Path now available on Amazon


Just a quick post today as an update. My first novel, The Shadowed Path, is now available to buy on Amazon (.com, .co.uk and .de) for anyone interested in the kindle version.
Here are the links:
http://www.amazon.com/dp/B005OZIHJW
https://www.amazon.co.uk/dp/B005OZIHJW
https://www.amazon.de/dp/B005OZIHJW

Next post:
Rules of Writing Part 1: How to Write Prolifically

Tuesday, September 27, 2011

When is my novel ready?

This post actually started as a reply to another post here: http://darkewhispers.blogspot.com/2011/09/why-good-review-of-bad-book-can-hurt.html  but became so long I figured it’s better off in its own little corner of the cybersphere.  

What makes someone a writer? In my opinion not all that much. Cobble a few words together, have the desire, do it because you love it, and hey presto, a writer is born. 

But does that mean you should then give your story a quick once-over, checking for any obvious issues, give it a rudimentary cover, and send it out into the world? From what I’ve seen so far (to my dismay but not surprise), there’s a lot... no wait... a LOT of junk out there saturating the ebook online shops (some shops are worse than others). When I say junk, I don’t mean to be rude or sound superior, I just mean that sometimes great ideas have been sent out way too quickly, haven’t been given the necessary time and vast attention to detail that a novel needs to make it really great. I’m talking about the re-writes (plural), the editing (plural), the sending out to third-party test-readers (not friends or family), the money or time or both spent on designing a really good, professional looking cover, the surprisingly complex task of setting the layout in print and ebooks, all of that. It seems crazy that someone would put the effort into writing an entire novel, even if many of them are short, and then throw it out there in its unfinished form.

It's a shame Smashwords, KDP, Createspace and the rest seem keen to make sure a book looks "good" without bothering about the written quality of the product within. (I use the term "good" lightly because there are still just so many obviously self-published badly cobbled together covers with poor layouts anyway). I know they can’t read every book for quality, but there should be some form of audit, because currently there’s nothing to separate the chaff. Sure, eventually a great book will do well on its own merit if it’s been marketed well and has good reviews, it’s just sad that so many readers might never read it because they’re too busy drowning in the morass of bad novels to ever find your gem.  

It’s tragic because It essentially means anyone with enough time to put enough words together (whether they make sense or not) and fashion some sort of cover, can publish. Which means they flood the market with rubbish and continue to give indie authors a bad name.

What’s sad is that as long as people churn out poor quality books and the ebook shops accept them, that reputation isn’t going to go anywhere. 

So if you’ve written a novel, fantastic. That in itself is a great achievement. Just make sure it’s the best you can manage... and then leave it somewhere for a while and return to it with some objectivity and edit it... repeat... repeat if needed... make sure people with no connection to you love it... then make sure it looks professional... 

...and then feel good about sending it out into the world knowing you’re contributing to positive change rather than negative stereotyping.

Monday, September 26, 2011

My first novel is available to buy!!

So while I trundle through the morass that is the kindle direct publishing experience, the incredibly user-friendly Smashwords has my book, The Shadowed Path, ready for purchase. You can find it here: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/90405

And you can read a sample for free to see whether you'd enjoy the rest of it or not. I plan on putting a sample up on my website soon too, but for now you can just get it from Smashwords.

And, if you want to buy it DONT!!! At least not until you've used this coupon number to get 20% off the list price!!

WJ63P


The coupon will be valid until 26th October so make the most of it!

Friday, September 23, 2011

In the works...

So last night (high on that sweet nectar that is coffee) I finished submitting The Shadowed Path to amazon kindle and the Smashwords collective. They're both now in review and should be up soon. Smashwords will take a week or so before it passes the novel on to the iBookstore, Barnes & Noble etc and in the meantime I'll be submitting my book to as many reviewers as will have me (in between work, finishing my degree, family, jogging along merrily with the London rat-race... its a busy life).

That said, having jumped through the kindle, smashwords hoops, if anyone needs any help or advice on the subject do get in touch, especially if you're a UK/Eurozone writer and have questions about getting an ITIN for tax.

Thursday, September 22, 2011

Cartographical evisceration


So, a day later, about four hours worth of learning curve, and a paper cut (second only to hard plastic wrapping in deadliness) and my map is finally done! Well, I say done... what I mean is it's good enough until (read if ever) I have the wherewithal, time and money to invest in a professional artist to make one up. But I gotta say I'm happy with the result. I've done two versions, one with a plain background that will go in the print edition of the novel and the other on parchment that will go on the website here. I'm just a bit worried the dimensions might not be right for the print edition and some of the fonts too small... we'll see.
Following the web-guide I linked to in the last post (very helpful), and using the wonders that are photoshop and free licence clip art, I managed to turn this:
And this (and others like them)

Into this!!!:


Not too shabby eh? Click on the images to see them better, right click and open in a new tab to see the full detailed version.
This will now be going up in the "The Shadowed Path" page and the html link will be on the ebook versions.
Oh, and for all you RPG lovers, feel free to use this map for any games you want to play!

Wednesday, September 21, 2011

To map, or not to map...




I love fantasy, love writing it, love reading it, love playing it (not that I have time for that much these days). It's a very visual experience for me, whether the visuals are imagined or watchable or tangible, being able to picture the surreal situations and step outside of reality for a while is as much a part of reading fantasy and sci-fi as engaging with the plot and characters.

So... while I'm putting the finishing touches on my plan for global domination I' wondering whether I should make a map for my fantasy book or not. The pros: Firstly, it'll be fun to do, I love anything artistic. Secondly, I already have a rough draft in the back page of the proof copy of my novel just to make sure cities and points of interest don't decide to emigrate to more scenic locations half way through the story. Thirdly, I always like it when a fantasy novel has a map included, and some (Martin, Tolkien, Jordan etc etc) really need them. So yes, I think I'm going to give it a try. It won't be included in the Kindle, iBook et al editions, and the print edition is still just far enough away that I could add a map into it should it turn out well enough.

But here are the cons: I would like to add the completed map to my website somewhere so I could add a link into the ebook editions, but I'm very much aware of not wanting to make my website and readers think I'm all about fantasy, because I'm not. My next novel (the cover of which you can see on the site) will be out at the start of next year and is a historical/contemporary thriller with a touch of romance. I do not want to be pigeon-holed into a genre. I appreciate that it's very early days but "start as you mean to go on" and all that.

First things first. Make the map, then decide. For anyone interested I'm basically using this technique: http://www.giveupalready.com/content.php?50-Fantasy-Map-Photoshop-Tutorial

Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Start small... think big


So this is it, my very first blog post. Quick bit about me: I'm a writer... for me that's first and foremost and anyone who has the bug will understand. I also dabble as a musician, computer nerd (who doesn't these days?) and general creative type. I live in London, UK, and I'm about to publish my first novel... okay, indie-publish. So I thought I would chronicle my journey and garner support while spreading the word and maybe helping other aspiring writers out there in the process and making new friends. Oh yes, and I will be blogging about books, reviewing them and anything else that takes my fancy in the process!  
And in the meantime feel free to check out my website by clicking HERE! and drop by and say hi.